First Draft
The trailer opens with titles flickering in like there is interference, along with a fuzzing sound as each one appears. Between each title a short clip appears of Joan and Jason, Cathy filming.
Title 1: Approximatley 275,000 people go missing in the UK every year
Cut to Cathy filming Jason and Joan. They all run together around a corner to inside a building to a flight of stairs. They are out of breath and extremely panicked.
Jason: Up here!
Title 2: One person goes missing every two minutes
Cut to them back inside the building. Jason and Joan run up the stairs, Cathy follows them with the camera.
Joan: Run! Go faster!
Title 3: Over 35,400 of these people are found dead
They all stop at the top of the stairs, unsure where to turn next. They all stand out of breath. Cathy speaks still holding the camera on Joan and Jason.
Cathy (desperatley): Where now?!
Jason: Wait, wait. Be Quiet
Title 4: At least 16,000 dissapear forever
"forever" continues to flicker in and out and then suddenly dissapears making it stand out from the rest of the title.
Cut to Cathy still filming Jason and Joan standing very close to her against a wall. Joan stands there covering her mouth with both hands, as if she is attempting to be completly silent and hold in a scream. Jason stands there very still also looking straight ahead, terrified. Cathy moves the camera around so it faces down the hall way. At the end there is a silhouette that moves in a strange way. She zooms in and the camera goes out of focus, then in focus again. The audience still can not see what the silhouette is, but they can tell it is not human.
Suddenly the shot cuts to black and the audience hear a girl's piercing scream. She continues to scream when a male and another female start screaming and crying. The audience know it is the three characters they have just seen. While the screams continue, the name of the film flickers in followed by the release date and institutional references.
Title 5: RUN
Title 6: October 2011
Cut to black.
Second Draft (changes highlighted)
The titles appear and flicker in and out like there is interference, along with a fuzzing sound as each one appears. Between each title a short clip appears of Joan and Jason, Cathy filming. First title appears.
Title 1: Approximatley 275,000 people go missing in the UK every year
Cut to Cathy filming Jason and Joan. They all run together around and up a flight of stairs. They are out of breath and extremely panicked. The shot is in night vision.
Jason: Up here!
Shot cuts to next title.
Title 2: One person goes missing every two minutes
Cut to them back inside the building. Jason and Joan run up the stairs, Cathy follows them with the camera.
Joan: Run!
Cut to next title.
Title 3: Over 35,400 of these people are found dead
Cut back to filming. They all stop at the top of the stairs out of breath, unsure where to turn next. Cathy speaks still holding the camera on Joan and Jason.
Cathy (desperatley): Where now?!
Jason: Through here!
Cut to next title.
Title 4: At least 16,000 dissapear forever
"forever" continues to flicker in and out and then suddenly dissapears making it stand out from the rest of the title.
Cut to Cathy still filming Joan standing very close to her against a wall. Joan stands there covering her mouth with both hands, as if she is attempting to be completly silent and hold in a scream. Cathy moves the camera around so it faces down the hall way. At the end there is a silhouette that moves in a strange way. She zooms in and the camera goes out of focus, then in focus again. The audience still can not see what the silhouette is, but they can tell it is not human.
Suddenly the shot cuts to black and the audience hear a girl's piercing scream. She continues to scream when a male and another female start screaming and crying. The audience know it is the three characters they have just seen. While the screams continue, the name of the film flickers in followed by the release date and institutional references.
Title 5: RUN
Title 6: October 2011
Cut to black.
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